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Fathom

I am the deep blue of the deep blue -- I dance outwardly, crashing white frothy spirals on the shoreline bringing life and death. I hold in abeyance the fish in the sea, the coral, fauna and the mighty Leviathan. They come and go at my bidding to take or be taken, to feed or be fed upon; as is my deep blue whimsy. I exhale and send treasures onto the sand with shining abundance to be found by explorers on my shores. I inhale and take back what I've given, burying deep beneath trenches my treasures to be found by explorers of the deep. Like stars in the heaven, I will be here to time indefinite to live forever with only the ebb and flow -- the fish, coral, fauna, and of course the great Leviathan.

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Date: 3/25/2016 6:41:00 AM
Wow! Amazingly penned... sounds like I'd like to be the flow of this verse. Infinity of the deep. Shaunda, I'm so glad to hear from you today. One day, I wish to write a poem and relate it to the Fathom of this poem. I stink at writing right now. But, somehow this one inspired a thought... lol...probably fade in the next minute. Anyways thanks. Linda
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/25/2016 7:14:00 AM
hahaha You don't stink... Your words flow just like you as a person flows. Your poem is the one that made me cry.. I really feel your words.
Date: 3/18/2016 4:24:00 PM
beautiful poem sis, I should not have read it though; my hair stood on end (not in a good way), no reflection on your fabulous write, The memory of my sadist father is to blame for this feeling, and that he tried to drown me in the North Sea !,thought I was good. bloody wrong again. must go. love you sis. Elizabeth. xxx
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/18/2016 5:07:00 PM
Oh man.. Sorry dear.. I wrote this long before we met.. :(
Date: 3/17/2016 9:29:00 PM
Shaunda, this is an outstanding write, beautifully penned, I am loving it 7 and welcome to poetry soup, enjoy your journey ~
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Shaunda Lindsay
Date: 3/17/2016 10:00:00 PM
Thank you so much.My father gave me the gift of writing just as yours did. I wrote my first poem while hiding from my father in my bedroom closet when I was 9 or 10 and I've never stopped. What you wrote gives me a glimpse of what a normal father daughter relationship could be . It's something I've only read about in books and seen in movies.. Crazy huh. Thank you again

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