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Father's Advice On Being a Man - For Adult Contest

Father's Advice On Being A Man ("For Adult Contest") Father said to son never be ashamed to be a man, should you get married, live your life with a plan. Not too harsh or rigid, else failure you will see, be a good decent man, the one you admire in me. Life can be so very cruel, the world can be too, live deeply as you love, loving family as we do. You see, it is the responsibility to be as good as your life will permit and you know you should. Never be ashamed for the world to see you cry, cry for joy, as life does go on even after you die. Write your core principles deep into solid stone, for there are no overs after we are passed on. Know that love is truly the great tie that binds, watch whom you embrace, the world has all kinds. Mothers are to be held in a very special embrace, with love in your heart and a smile on your face. If life ever gives you far more than you can bear ask family to help, just you remember to share. Remember the love coming from Mother and I, walk a good path in this world and know the why. April 25, 2015

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Date: 4/26/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for all the positive and kind replies to this write. So much of it came in words/advice given me by my father and grandfather. I wrote from the heart and hoped it paid due homage to both men. Family, the true treasure we have...
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Date: 4/26/2015 7:58:00 AM
This is a conversation every father should have with his son. Perfect entry!
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Date: 4/26/2015 7:31:00 AM
Some good advice that your father gave to you..The world would be a much better place if men would stand up and be real men as decribed above..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:11:00 AM
Inspirational. Imparts true wisdom. #7
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Date: 4/25/2015 9:41:00 PM
Hello Robert, I'm back now (slowly) since my sabbatical to get my first book published. Best of luck in the contest. I would think you'd be the "winner" with this quite poignant and sublime rhyme verse. "Know that love is truly the great tie that binds, . . ." is the one "anchor verse" for me of great importance. In fact, I venture that each of other lead first verses in each stanza achieve the same technique effect. Marvelous as always!! A "7" Sir, and a FAV for me. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 4/25/2015 3:39:00 PM
Dear Robert, Your poem brought tears to my eyes as it made me think of the wisdom my late father often imparted. You must be a wonderful, loving father. Such a joy to read this touching verse. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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