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Father To Son:  Part II

(Apropos The Visit—Part II)

 

When you left

soaring free

the lingering void sought

to shackle me

in the silent dungeon

of stoic grief.

 

Faith melted away remorse

and the psalms of reality

in living dreams spread a table

laden with a plethora of left joys

revealed—surreal; and

the God’s shared creation

that you past this way in your going;

ancestors cheered your chosen coming.

 

Where tears once watered

the flowers of your resting abode,

now laughter peels away the leaves

releasing petals of budding love;

and we’re now at peace

with your spirit forever here.

 

God is not mocked.

Take care we judge not.

Rest well, my sweet Prince.

Father To Son: Part II (Apropos The Visit—Part II) When you left soaring free the lingering void sought to shackle me in the silent dungeon of stoic grief. Faith melted away remorse and the psalms of reality in living dreams spread a table laden with a plethora of left joys revealed—surreal; and the God’s shared creation that you past this way in your going; ancestors cheered your chosen coming. Where tears once watered the flowers of your resting abode, now laughter peels away the leaves releasing petals of budding love; and we’re now at peace with your spirit forever here. God is not mocked. Take care we judge not. Rest well, my sweet Prince.

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