Fate's Gift

When fate decides to bring you love, Embrace it with your heart, United with the one for you, Your life will truly start, As lonesome tears and fears depart. For Janette’s When Fate Decides contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 7:46:00 AM

A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:56:00 PM

oh, man, I forgot all about this contest!! Dang, I sure have a lot to catch up on, Jac,k. I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for the reminder by my seeing it.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 11:47:00 AM

I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Jack. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2012 5:42:00 AM

wow a stupendous piece of brilliant advice Jack .. must check this one out .. am lagging behind as I have to wait for Ron to sit with me and business has been booming so little time for poetry and only escalating as holidays draw near ..oh dear .. waiting on new babe too luv .. best of luck for a grand entry ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/5/2012 1:47:00 AM

Nice one Jack, and upbeat too, like it a lot xx

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/4/2012 11:32:00 PM

A guess when fate says so, it will be so. Best of wishes for you, Jack! One love. Joy Wells

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/4/2012 5:06:00 PM

So light and uplifting!! I like it... Terry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2012 4:30:00 PM

If fate only brought us love, life would be much better..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winning material for sure..Thanks for the great reviews of my work..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/4/2012 3:43:00 PM

so true....love comes so softly at times. a tender buddy becomes a love.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/4/2012 2:32:00 PM

Beautiful piece right here my friend! I love this delightful poem Jack! What a lovely little write, perfect piece, Great Work!!

Girish Gokul

Date: 9/4/2012 2:19:00 PM

Nice work. Thanks for sharing your work. Regards, Girish