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Fates Footfalls

FATES FOOTFALLS fate’s footfalls - the bull’s running. i hear the sound of a stampede at my ankles. the rush of blood pulsing through my veins, hammering my heart, quite like a silver spike penetration of a vampiric scream. (my bedclothes sweating. i turn) darkness on a crisp Winter’s eve. snow’s falling...i see their shape, and then his eyes, like icy daggers. i’m walking with increasing speed but the sound of heavy steps following … breathing on my neck. i fall (like a cliff, i hang off my bed) fooling fate, i wake up to a sunny day. i wash the panic off my face. i run all day long, never noticing footprints, the same width, same length, the odor of rotten eggs, and the black hood that fades in and out. i rub my eyes as death drops his ax… (i know i won’t wake up) 3/11/2017

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Date: 3/26/2018 10:33:00 PM
Back with congrats, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2018 10:36:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 3/21/2018 8:32:00 AM
Oh Kim, the reality of "fate" creeping into your dreams. Wonderfully done. I really like the parenthetical asides "gasping" between stanza....thanks for participating in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/13/2018 7:17:00 PM
Very scary imagery in this well written poem Kim..Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Che!
Date: 3/13/2018 2:41:00 PM
Great verse Kim, those dreams where the scene keeps changing spooks you when you wake up. If you wake up lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 2:48:00 PM
For sure!
Date: 3/13/2018 11:56:00 AM
I love this one, Kim I think you may still wake up!!! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 11:57:00 AM
Thanks :):)
Date: 3/13/2018 10:50:00 AM
Wow - very rich poem in imagery and mood. Superbly done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Line!

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