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Fate Twists

Undermining base Furtive steps during a year Revealed false foundation Hidden behind three fake smiles Discovering covered lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 5:03:00 PM
Most certainly...You can't sit back and wait...You must venture out to find the way...Nice poetry...All the best Nayda
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/18/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 3/18/2018 4:47:00 PM
A very deep tanka Nayda I despise being lied to and those fake smiles cant hide the lies - you just need to look at the eyes:-( hugs Jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/18/2018 8:32:00 PM
Indeed Jan. Very wise words. Hugs, Nayda.

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