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Fate Is Sealed

FATE IS SEALED This road I've walked before I should know it so very well Because it opened up a door One that lead straight to hell I met a rider upon a dark steed He asked me what's my pleasure Then wondering if there's a deed Or if perhaps any kind of treasure Said I could be rich,even famous Play the best guitar ones heard Maybe I'd like the luck of shamus Yes I could even sing like a bird He asked me so many questions After each I replied with "No" wondered if I had any suggestions Which I told him yes to just go told me my wish was granted now He'd be back in 10 years to collect collect I ask and he just said wow I should show him a bit more respect Laughing said he just bought my soul Confused I told him of my concern Said should spend my time whole laughing he said in ten I'll burn Deja vu I hear beating hoofs again There upon his steed silky smooth Smiling he said shall we begin I smiled telling him slow your groove Confused he asked what was I up to Said your the cross road demon right Looking Leary said yes thats true I said my dads the prince of night Moral of this story if one was to be had Always know with whom you do deal As they should, so none can be mad Never know it may be your fate you seal

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/24/2019 9:00:00 AM

Brenda, I like this poem. Wonder how I missed it. I agree with the others who commented. It flows well as a write. And has a message of hope. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/24/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard I do enjoy your visits! ;)

John Fleming

Date: 7/13/2019 9:01:00 AM

Well, Mistress Rhymer, it certainly does flow smoothly along...enjoyed the unexpected twist of fate at the end -- cleverly engineered! My warmest affections. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/14/2019 3:32:00 AM

Hahaha Johnny was a fun write and it wasn't to end that way in the beginning! It's an old poem I found and decided to either finish it or toss it! So I revamped it! Thank you!;) All my affection!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 7/12/2019 7:12:00 PM

I like the moral of the story and rhyme muppet, great work for a puppet

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2019 1:10:00 AM

Well thank you nick I'm so happy you do! Lol did you get the moral? Haha!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/12/2019 3:22:00 PM

Nice piece Brenda, full of nice rhyme, flow and good imagery too. your moral words at the end are very true and well worth considering long and hard. Hope you're having a great day, hope to catch up soon, Have a great weekend, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/13/2019 1:11:00 AM

Ahhh Gordon thank you so much your words are appreciated!;)