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Fate

At the dawn of darkness I shall sleep Until the world falls beneath gods feet And the oceans shall dry And black shall be the sky The atmosphere will say its Goodbyes And death shall approach all who lies The rings will be present Upon the hands of the taker As the lost ones shall meet their maker But you still have a chance still soul As long as you do not let lust control You power your fate And eternal spirit shines bright You shall guide your path with light And find your future as a door lying in wait You have the key So open that door And be free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:22:00 PM
Kagun Jordan, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 6/3/2014 2:02:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Kagun. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/2/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kagun :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2014 7:59:00 AM
Kagun, a lovely inspiring verse... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:27:00 PM
Hi Kagun,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/30/2014 7:33:00 PM
:) pretty good bro!
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