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Fate

ghosts of yet unwritten futures surround me all to young to know give me all the whining lectures watch my innocence all flow flow from my veins plus from my heart i try and chain this wicked art the crimson blood it paints a scene a massacre of thoughts it seems the shinning watch of naivety breath upon my shaking wrist the edge so numb carves daintily another painful, deeper kiss its touch like euphoria trying to pull away from the bliss trying not to get ideas of ways to enter the abyss of life and death i swallow hard, take my last breath this, my fate?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/6/2010 10:49:00 AM
This is your fate poem that needs to be featured Kevin. Smile. An awesome poem, I just happen to read it while I was looking for the one they have featured. Seems to be a depth of feeling imagery in it, Good job , Sincerely, Moses
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