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Fatalist

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Monotangled Sense Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Dilly Sally. Date written: 12/06/2023

~he knows; has been warned he's self-destructing, yet turns the other cheek. why?~

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Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/14/2023 3:21:00 AM
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I've read it several times. I keep getting the feeling he just doesn't care. I think we get to stages in our lives like that, although most of the time its fleeting and doesn't last. A pensive write, sorry if I am way off the mark, its just the way I see it. Best wishes Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2023 4:56:00 PM
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You're right, SV. He doesn't care. Happy holidays, my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 12/6/2023 11:19:00 AM
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Deep one llner..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2023 1:47:00 PM
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Thank you very much, SO:-)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/6/2023 7:16:00 AM
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Remorse, guilt or a number of inner thoughts we cannot discern. Best wishes for your Monoku in the contest, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2023 7:21:00 AM
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Very true! Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Lin:-)

Book: Shattered Sighs