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Fatal Obsession

She knows everyone who is in his cellphone contact lists. She knows where he goes to hang out with friends on Thursdays and Saturdays. She hates seeing any female friends around him, except for his family. She "falls sick" whenever he plans to visit his parents. Sometimes she forces herself on him, and tears his shirts with her nails, if he refuses to make love to her - if he does, he gets bites on his shoulders, and scratches on his back. There is a gun hidden in her purse; if he decides to leave her one day, she plans to shoot him, then shoot herself. "If I love you, I can kill you," she always warned him, since the first time they met in a Chinese restaurant. Her seductive voice made him lustful, rather than heeding her warning to stay away from her..... Date: 2/2/2016

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Date: 2/16/2016 10:32:00 PM
:) LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/17/2016 1:32:00 AM
*^_^* Teddy
Date: 2/7/2016 7:17:00 PM
You are welcome
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/8/2016 6:38:00 AM
*^_^*
Date: 2/6/2016 4:16:00 PM
Teddy, Congrats on "Your Dark Side of Love WIN!!!" XOX ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/7/2016 4:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda! *^_^* <3
Date: 2/5/2016 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Teddy! The gun is a bit unnerving!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thank you for your applause Balveen! ;-) The gun p0art added some chilly effect, lol...
Date: 2/4/2016 10:27:00 AM
Oh my.. hope this wasn't a real experience. Does happen though... I like how you wrote this, dark and dramatic, expressing all the red flags ignored. Congratulations on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 5:38:00 AM
Hi Susan. You are right. It happens in some relationships. Thank you for commenting on my work!! *^_^*
Date: 2/4/2016 6:54:00 AM
Well written and scary for a placement, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin! *^_^*
Date: 2/4/2016 6:50:00 AM
gosh what a deep scary poem Teddy congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 5:32:00 AM
Lol. Thanks Jan! *^_^*
Date: 2/3/2016 1:29:00 PM
A very vivid poem you have penned here Teddy, most definitely a 7... Blessings and peace
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/4/2016 4:19:00 AM
Thank you so much bro! :-)
Date: 2/2/2016 3:58:00 PM
inspiring
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/4/2016 4:19:00 AM
Thank you Justin! ;-)
Date: 2/2/2016 11:32:00 AM
wow...scary thoughts but it does happen! Good write, i enjoyed the read!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! *^_^*

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