Fat

Fatty tissue scares me Far, far more than it should. Flat body seems like the Fastest way to meet girls. Five days a week I starve For some girl I don't know - Faith I have put in thin! Sept. 23, 2916 For contest Pleiades F

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/27/2016 2:30:00 PM

A unique and creative way to depict fat, Larry. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/27/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim...fun contest. Larry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:57:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great wins poems, Larry - Well done - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/27/2016 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine..I'm so glad you liked it!..Larry

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 6:20:00 PM

They should love you for who you are not because you carry a few extra pounds Larry! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/27/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thanks, Jan..I agree with you, LOL

Jean Murray

Date: 9/26/2016 4:06:00 PM

Larry, with skills like this, you need not worry about how fat you are. Well done.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/27/2016 6:30:00 AM

You're very kind..thank you!