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Oh enigma ... Endless hours of twilight-daubed magic - Enchanting walks 'side a moon-splattered sea, Alight with silver doubloon wave-tops that mock the starry vault, Toes pressed to the cool, pearly-soft hem of sand, Imparting each other our deepest notions and dearest aims. Then ... made a joke to your friends, Grand laughs over drinks. Oh paradox ... Countless midday meadows, abounding - Hazy summer days where tall goldenrod and foxglove Curtsied the breeze above our bare backsides, As if in honor of the sublime, tender, soul-sharing love we made In the sweet, supple grasses that wove our blanket ... Hot, breathy moans lost to the buzz of honeybees and hoppers. Then ... made but a farce in passing, A casual remark twisted for the sake of giggles. Oh ambiguity ... All those preciously amazing romantic escapades - Priceless moments rare and real, that so few ever get to know ... Made but fodder for your careless ego ... and I your fool. Worst of all? I would do it ALL ... again. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Polarities And Paradoxes" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/7/2020 9:52:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your first place win in Line's contest with this beautiful write _Constance
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Date: 2/6/2020 5:30:00 PM
G- a paradox within an ambiguity wrapped in an enigma... such is love. But we do it all again. Congrats on your breathy, enchanting win, friend ~ John
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:42:00 PM
Another mesmerizing write G, congrats, I see this is a winner!
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Date: 2/6/2020 1:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Very colourful! Well done!
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Date: 2/6/2020 9:37:00 AM
Loved your poem, Gregory.
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Date: 2/6/2020 7:24:00 AM
You move us from lovely imagery to time spent with friends...love that! Beautiful as always, dear friend!
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