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Fascination

It was him, and immediately I felt the very moment he too, saw me as I entered the room. I averted my eyes, seemingly not magnetized, yet his form continued to caress the corner of my eyes. My entire body was so attuned to his every movement, I sighed. Suffused with such warmth was I, knowing he was looking at me…alone. I tried to turn away, but felt the searing heat where his eyes touched my skin. I realized I was hypnotized, mesmerized by the power of intense attraction. Minutes passed by, I would catch again his eyes, staring, brooding. Overwhelmed by his presence, I felt such effervescence. Senses wired to all that was him, I was exulted to know that his eyes were as glued to me as mine were to him. Nobody, no one else. Him and only him. He moved, the second I floated to him. I stopped, time to catch my breath. Him whose strides came quickly to my side. Such panther’s grace, eyes holding my stare, he smiled. The wineglass in my hand trembled, serene not I, far from calm. Suffused with much warmth was I, knowing he was looking at me…alone. I turned away, and felt the searing heat where his eyes just touched my skin. Hand on my elbow, he silently led me to where the crowds were, to dance . Such arrogance, I thought I’ve had enough as a child, of dominance. Yet I, surprised, felt the rush of liquid fire through my veins with his large hand, warm and steady on my bare back. Alive were all nerve ending, as we went dancing through the night, I heard the loud sound of the wild beating of my heart. Suddenly…I was jarred, and from a dream, woke up I.
Kim Patrice Nunez DREAMS CONTEST - 10 th Place SPONSOR: ROB CARMACK 23 April 2015

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Date: 5/1/2015 3:45:00 PM
I agree with damn that ending! The title is appropriate, for that's what I felt throughout the poem - fascination! #7!
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Date: 5/1/2015 5:37:00 AM
Damn that ending!!! hahaha. I'd be so pissed to wake up after all of that. It happens to the best of us unfortunately.. I was hooked from beginning to end Kim.."I averted my eyes, seemingly not magnetized. Yet his persona continued to caress the corner of my eyes."Love those lines... fantastic little story here. 7!!:) Always,Laura
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:39:00 PM
KIM. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 4/28/2015 7:04:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Kim this is truly inspirational - loved it first time and even more on second reading:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:31:00 PM
Kim, stopping back to read your poem again and to congratulate you on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:26:00 PM
Kim :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful dreaming scene beautifully colored with romantic feeling. Well done. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 4/25/2015 4:58:00 PM
This poem floats its beauty over the words like a warm wind might rattle the leaves on a autumn’s eve bringing tranquility to the soul. Well written with poetic flow aided by superb imagery. It tantalizes us with succulent imagery to seduce us with the nectar of poetic creativity. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/25/2015 12:08:00 AM
you did a great job with your entry The way you got it to make that pattern was REALLY cool. Sounds like a great dream too, but Dang, those kind always get interrupted.
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:47:00 PM
Well double diamonds demands double curtsy, well done!
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:39:00 PM
.....and I am the Simon Cowell of Britians got Poets! Truly A7
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Date: 4/24/2015 10:37:00 PM
A7
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Date: 4/24/2015 3:00:00 AM
wow, you caress each line and thought with ease and beauty, kim... this is one nightscape i like to have!... it's a shape poem too!.. spill ink, kim!.. huggs
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Date: 4/24/2015 2:16:00 AM
A dream dance, swaying into the fire of romance...the body of your poem inflames the senses into the suspense of wild desire Kim. "Through the night, I heard the loud sound of the wild beating of my heart..." such passionate pounding of true instincts. The structure of this poem is magnificent. This is a poem of awesome sensuality, with it's hot nuances Kim...J.A.B.
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Date: 4/23/2015 1:59:00 PM
Well done, Kim. Quite a dream! I love the way you shaped the text. Thanks for your visit to my page.
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Date: 4/23/2015 1:04:00 PM
Wow Kim the concrete picture is flawless...the content is lovely Tim
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Date: 4/23/2015 11:45:00 AM
I knew it must of been a dream or I was suffering from dementia because I don't remember the two of us hooking up. Excellent write Kim from a passionate poet!
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:43:00 AM
good flow.. beautiful dream.. nice shape :)!...olive eloisa
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:42:00 AM
YOU BLEW ME AWAY WITH THIS ONE!!!! Must have taken a while to get this one just right!!! Am I impressed... you betcha! Love, Jack xxxxxxxxx AMAZING!!! A winner for sure!
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Date: 4/23/2015 8:07:00 AM
Oh my, Kim...what an amazing dream! Beautifully written and put into this diamond shape form. Best wishes for the contest! Sandra
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Date: 4/23/2015 6:47:00 AM
I want to live this dream :)...Exquisite writing. Swooning over this. Definitely A #7. And a favorite.
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Date: 4/23/2015 6:03:00 AM
What a beautiful dream this is! I wish all your dreams are as sweet as this one :) I admire the way you have described this romantic dream , and wish you the best of luck in the contest my dear friend. Fadi.
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Date: 4/23/2015 4:42:00 AM
- Just wish such beautiful and romantic dreams every night - and that they come as beautiful diamonds ...... - Really a beautiful poem, dear Kim !! - A winning poem, certainly !!!! - I wish you luck ..... and one super lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2015 3:46:00 AM
Wow Kim, Such an incredible piece of writing. I was completely enthralled with every word that I read. I just don't know how you could design a writing like this in the form of diamonds. It is simply beyond me. Such a great effort Kim------kind regards----John
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Date: 4/23/2015 3:29:00 AM
Kim this is spectacular - a dream write for the contest - the form you have used is wonderful the words float from the page - good luck in the contest - a 7 and faves:-) Hugs jan xx
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