Fascination

I see you... above my porch; Roses... pink, red and white dancing in delight like my heart beating when your face turns aglow. I feel you... 'neath my skin... warm as an ember in the coldest winter; YOU... turn it to summer. 1ST PLACE BRIAN'S SELECT B, any form, any theme Contest Judged: 6/11/2020 1:45:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 3RD PLACE Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest

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Diane Perna

Date: 10/10/2021 12:58:00 PM

Wow, you're super talented! I love many of your poems, incredible!

John Watt

Date: 6/20/2020 11:02:00 PM

With beauty, warmth, nature, and love, your poem hits all the high points for me. Enjoyed the read, JCB. Blessings to you, John

Debjani Mitra

Date: 6/19/2020 10:41:00 PM

So cute.... simple yet full of emotions.. that's love... lovely yalto

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/16/2020 5:39:00 PM

Beautiful! Love this poem, JCB! Want to read more and more of your creative and passionate writing! Love, Mala

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2020 12:36:00 PM

Delighted to see this poem win TOP honors, JCB..BIG congrats!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2020 2:49:00 PM

JCB your Yalto made me smile especially with images like "neath my skin/warm as an ember." So creative! Congratulations on your win!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 7:34:00 AM

"warm as an ember in the coldest winter"...such a soothing feeling! An instant fave for me. Congratulations on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 3:02:00 PM

I absolutely adore this one. Congrats. And also a fave.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 2:03:00 PM

- A great and creative 3rd place ... with a smile ...congratulations so much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 6:56:00 AM

This is an awesome Yalto, JCB:-) Heartiest congratulations on your podium finish!

Jcb Brul
Date: 6/7/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Edward for the place ..All the best.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/26/2020 3:40:00 PM

Fascinating! Lovely penned! :) gw

Jcb Brul
Date: 6/7/2020 8:49:00 AM

Thanks dear poet Gershon..Keep safe.

Silent One

Date: 5/25/2020 5:20:00 PM

A beautiful moment... Sensual and romantic..

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/25/2020 5:42:00 PM

Thank you dear poet Silent One...You captured the message.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/25/2020 11:25:00 AM

Lovely piece so well penned indeed JCB, Blessings,Gordon

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/25/2020 5:41:00 PM

Thank you dear poet Gordon for dropping by and leaving a heartwarming comment. Stay safe.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/25/2020 9:42:00 AM

You take one there, JCB, such is this wonderful poetry...

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM

Thank your dear poet Harry for you appreciation..Best wishes!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2020 9:41:00 AM

Beautiful! Nicely done Yalto! A fun form!

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Kim. I just known this form lately. It's fun to weave such form..Stay safe!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2020 6:35:00 PM

What a beautiful Yalto JCB! You have mastered this form with great talent! xxoo

Jcb Brul
Date: 5/24/2020 8:40:00 PM

Ohhh, thank you so much dear poet Connie for such a heartwarming comment. I am truly humbled. Be safe!