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Wet foggy morning, a shy daylight wakes me up with the birds music. The cats heard my voice, they call me to have their breakfast. Before my coffee, I am their waitress. I look at them while they eat, they look happy, so do I. The sun starts to show as the fog is fading away, not a jumper needed, but only short sleeves in a gifted sunny day by nearly winter. Cows are milked and they go out to graze in the green meadows. This is the country, where the time seems to stop, where the stress is confused and faded away with the early fog. We feed the pigs, rabbits and chickens. They look at us so grateful. I go out for a walk among the chestnut trees watching the crows chasing the hawks, listening to every note the little birds sing. Chilly nightime with a clear sky, bright stars to contemplate, a reverie for the eyes watched from the farm's warmth.

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Date: 11/20/2023 1:22:00 AM
You bring elation with your verses. A visit to your farm provides us with lovely imagery. Blessings
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/20/2023 1:42:00 AM
Good morning Victor. There is something in the countryside difficoult to describe. Thank you for your always kind words. Have a great weekxxx
Date: 11/19/2023 5:21:00 PM
such enjoyable poetry, o worked at farm, when i was a kid, meignbor's farm, they were very good friend, your poetry is very nspiring and breathtaking, "awesome" poem yann
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/19/2023 5:30:00 PM
Happy about your kind words my friend. Enchantée je suis de recevoir ta messagexxxx
Date: 11/19/2023 4:16:00 PM
sounds like your visit to the farm is refreshing. I appreciate how you described the activities as well as the weather...you made me feel as if I was there. I especially liked the last three lines. What a beautiful reverie for you. Enjoy your visit...thanks for sharing, dearest Maria. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/19/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara. I appreciate your commentxxxHave a nice evening you tooxxxx
Date: 11/19/2023 3:02:00 PM
Absolutely adore this poem Maria…..its lovely and wholesome! Debx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/19/2023 3:23:00 PM
Hi Deb. I really appreciate your kind comment. Blessingsxxx

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