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Farmer's Cradle

Farmer plowed the soil In green field’s Sow grow in fruity Duty is finished Finally he will sound sleep— Haiku (hokku) Form By: lena lie 25/9/07

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Date: 5/30/2014 8:14:00 PM
I appreciate this so much Lena. I believe farming is the most noble pursuit of humanity, along with warfare. No other toil strengthens men and women better. Rest is such a beautiful thing. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:31:00 AM
I really dedicate this poem to the farmer for me they are my silent hero. Their works are exceptional. Thanks for you ever wonderful comment Justin.
Date: 5/23/2014 8:05:00 PM
Love your cute title. I think every hard working farmer longs for a sound sleep!!
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:36:00 AM
thanks...yes, I agree with you.
Date: 5/23/2014 8:55:00 AM
Lena, thank you for the comment on my comemnt:)
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:37:00 AM
Lena, thank you for the comment on my comment... about your comment on my comment....Linda
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:35:00 AM
thanks the same for the comment.
Date: 5/22/2014 9:58:00 PM
Lena, this is a fine verse, and haiku... Is the HOKKU an extended version of the haiku? Enjoyed..>Linda
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:52:00 AM
Yes, its the same thing...thanks again.
Date: 11/3/2013 6:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this...I love to grow a garden every year...
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:53:00 AM
to have a garden is so refreshing in the eye, it can ease your burden and lighten your spirit. Thanks.

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