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Farewell My Friend

We shared so much together  from boys to youths to men My brother from another mother,  my very truest friend Fate dealt the cruelest blow,  and took you away from me I thought my heart may break,  but from pain you were set free I miss you every single day  Your always on my mind Your laugh , the jokes ,the stories  We shared ,work rest n play One day my time will come My life will be at an end I will not fear whats happening Till we meet again my friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 3:42:00 AM
- Hello Hilary :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2015 9:42:00 PM
Hi Hilary, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/16/2015 9:12:00 PM
Hilary, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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