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Far-Gone

There once was a man that was far-gone Whisky, beer, vodka he had sipped on Then on corner called a cab Into the phone he did blab Come to corner of Walk_Don't Walk peon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 2:24:00 PM
thanks for your kind comments sarah on my poem fathers day, I got baptized on fathers d ay in 1003 so have lots to look forward too now,
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Date: 6/10/2012 2:46:00 PM
thanks sarah for you kind comments on my poem so close yet so fara way, it is real life sadly, but god has all in his hands so i am now free, i had prayer tonight and had a good cry and am fine now, some times we best off just with God, take care my dear friend from diane
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Date: 6/10/2012 2:06:00 PM
Not a drop touches these lips anymore, Sara! This is why! Jimbo
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Date: 6/10/2012 1:02:00 PM
a fun read all the way, sara.. i like your crisp sense of humor.. on to the winning list!...:) hugggs!
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:17:00 AM
You have me smiling with this lim this morning Sara. Cute one. love phyl
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Date: 6/10/2012 3:53:00 AM
aww a nice poem and thanks for your kind commentsd on my poem dedicated to my poetry soup friends,
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Date: 6/9/2012 8:18:00 PM
haha. the way you spelled it at the end. VEry cute, Sara.
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Date: 6/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
cute one mom! We had a good time at VBS this year.
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:17:00 PM
Deff. one of my faves now Sara...INTERTAINMENT!! Thanks for stopping in and reading my work,much thanks,sincerely,Kacey
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Date: 6/9/2012 4:36:00 PM
the non mexican , pee-on, love it mate well done
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Date: 6/10/2012 6:15:00 PM
i still thing it is cute babe
Date: 6/9/2012 3:32:00 PM
Ah yes, this is a very funny limerick my friend! I really enjoyed the great last line you presented at the end! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 6/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
"Very nice, limerick Sara. Carma"
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