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Far From Wistful Whispers

He whispered softly against every inch of her skin She could sense his yang Still in need of her yin His sweet wistful breath lingered once again beyond borders within His presence held authority of what once belonged to him She knew the time to leave before She would give in This would be the first time She wouldn't let him win Her drumming heart was beating fast as She closed the open door Her vision blurred,She walked away and strolled along the shore She brushed sand-wishes off her feet and wiped dew mist from her cheek She lilted up her hazel eyes into the starry sky She watched the distant stars glisten up so high Lunar limbs wrapped her small waist Poured moondust 'pon her face Made her dream of dreams anew where She' d sail over the blue Where She'd let emotions flow to the one who makes her whole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/2/2014 1:55:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, Another really good write here all sorts of mixed emotions going on. You defiantly do have a way of expressing your words. Gonna read some more when I get some more spare time. God Bless you Kevin
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:52:00 AM
I sense longing and daydreaming mixed into one. Especially fond of original expressions such as sand-wishes - you're a killer writer, Charmaine - carry on.
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:48:00 PM
lunar limbs on her waist Wow, where do you come up with these awesome images, Sweetie. I can't believe you don't enter that one poem into Nette's contest. You could have so many wins!!!
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:37:00 PM
truly very deep beautiful pen charmaine love how you drew this piece
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:24:00 PM
splendor of love shines through your lines. charms.... totally adorable.. huggs
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful sad, only you could write.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:09:00 PM
Full of melancholy and romantically beautiful, I really like how you ended this poem!
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:02:00 PM
When I read your poetry Charmaine, it allows me to drift on a different plane, and that's a wonderful feeling, James :)xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:58:00 AM
How beautifully you describe your sadness. A well penned descriptive poem Charmaine.
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Date: 11/28/2014 9:24:00 AM
A precious gift she holds – the heavens rejoices and the moon pours forth soft light . . . dream little one, for where there are dreams, there is hope and where there is hope the spirit lives, love will blossom . . . the moon watches! Love your poem and story – told just right.
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:43:00 AM
beautifully penned Charma:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:02:00 AM
It takes a very strong woman to walk away...so glad it has a happy ending....hugs Tim
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