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Far Fair This Ride

Much like this ride, I'll walk the endless course As seen among wayfarers’ eyes dark gold where swallows reel above to reinforce the edge of night, far fair, I do behold. ............... Rithimus Divisa 6 Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden Originally posted 10/ 25/ 2018 Resubmitted 9/ 22/ 2020 ---------------------

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Date: 10/15/2020 7:56:00 AM
Creative contest entry. Way to go with this winner. SK
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Date: 9/27/2020 10:55:00 AM
an utter gem, Nette! Big congrats to you in Greg's contest.
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Date: 9/25/2020 7:09:00 PM
It's a pleasure to return with a big round of applause, Nette. Congratulations on your excellent win with this inspiring gem. Warmest wishes, dear poetess, enjoy your win! ~Susan
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Date: 9/25/2020 7:08:00 PM
Love the idea of the wayfarer walking an endless course, Nette. Enjoyed this one! Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 9/25/2020 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Rithimus Divisa 6 Premiere Poetry Contest, Nette - I appreciate you taking the time to enter. This was a contest full of quality, and the placements came down to very small things, indeed - what a joy to read such poetic cream! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3
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Date: 9/24/2020 10:39:00 AM
I think this poem is awesome, a wonderful idea to re-post it for the contest. you sound like a female Shakespeare sometimes dear Nette, especially this poem. Good luck my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/23/2020 11:36:00 PM
Great lines you got here, Nette:)
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Date: 9/23/2020 4:38:00 PM
Beguiling beauty spills with effortless delicacy from your gifted pen, Nette. Exquisite and elegant. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, dear poetess.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/23/2020 12:33:00 PM
Lovely stanza you chose for the contest--all the best, Nette,
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Date: 9/23/2020 12:25:00 PM
Evocative, Nette, with layers of depth. Best wishes for the contest. I think Gregory will really like this write.
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:07:00 AM
Exquisite extract for the contest. Best of luck. ~~
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Date: 9/23/2020 7:05:00 AM
A verse in its own right Nette, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2020 5:58:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Why have you posted your poem "WILLOW" three times? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2020 2:16:00 PM
Anne, no internet for days..just using my celphone and it created 3 samecooms!...thanka

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