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Far Away Rain

Subtle thoughts of yesterday rumble in every dancing bolt of energy across the sacrificial sky Tepid droplets of moisture awaken senses once lost and lonely seeking to breathe another day Thunder rings loudly (or is that your heart?) in a far away cloud calling out my name Water falling down gently eyes and hands wide open catching every part of you

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/7/2016 8:26:00 AM

Very brilliant write. Tim you did a good job here. A big 7 from me..............//hugs

White Wolf

Date: 10/7/2016 1:14:00 AM

Very romantic Tim. Beautiful /|\

Chris Hagy

Date: 10/6/2016 3:57:00 PM

This is beautiful Tim! Love "Subtle thoughts" and "senses once lost" Kudos from far away:)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Chris..

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/6/2016 3:39:00 PM

Really well done, I give you thunderous applause!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 3:43:00 PM

lol...thanks Arthur

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/6/2016 1:56:00 PM

This is one of your most beautiful ones...I really find it mesmerizing.A fave.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 2:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Charma. a fav : )...I was inspired by the warm rain. Made me feel like dancing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2016 1:51:00 PM

- Beautiful and romantic, Tim - Love it - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 2:04:00 PM

Thanks A-L

Eve Roper

Date: 10/6/2016 12:55:00 PM

Awesome, Tim, this really has a lot of sentiment in your descriptions one of your very best. Hugs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 1:04:00 PM

Oh thank you dear friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/6/2016 12:39:00 PM

All under the umbrella of your love. Very romantic, Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 12:43:00 PM

Thank you DT my friend.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/6/2016 12:37:00 PM

wow, this is beautiful, tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 12:40:00 PM

Thank you so very much Ilene.

Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 11:41:00 AM

This is beautiful, it reaches out and touches the heart. I like how the rain becomes her love, the thunder her heartbeat and the lightening(assumption) the spark that illuminates your world. Really nicely done.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris. Welcome to PS.