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Fantasy Fish In a Fantasy Ocean

Myths and legends have held the hearts spell bound for years Mermaids, mythical animals, phoenix's have kept us enraptured in childhood One of granny's tales was of an ocean high above the Himalayas Hanging in mid air like a globe ruled by a magician king and his doting wife Sequinned scaly scalloping flagships in myriad colours float in water without being wet They could switch their coloured costumes and genders at random Their comic foolery held me in much delight Loving each other and holding flaps they swam in circles Singing sweetest songs quivered only to good children and gods They could open their flaps to swallow in fruit And shut like an umbrella to chew their juicy delight They could rock and roll into a wrap and twist and shake in feverish madness When sad and I shed a tear I was frightfully warned That the tear would scallop to their beautiful rainbow kingdom To choke out the music of one mellifluous scintillating sequinned fish My dreamscapes and reality have been filled with their enigmatic lives Of the fantasy fish fishing in their fruity coral reef in a fantasy ocean Balveen Cheema November 12, 2015 Contest: Fantasy Fish In A Fantasy Ocean Sponsor:Julia Ward

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Date: 12/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
Your imagery takes me to the colored world of the ocean..... Congrats for your fantastic WIN Balveen! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
How sweet Teddy! Thanks!
Date: 12/7/2015 12:18:00 AM
How lovely Balveen .. congrats on fine win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:32:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win!! -lu *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 5:01:00 AM
Laura, can your couplets for 'Just one more day' be unrhymed or do you prefer it rhymed as a proper couplet (I've seen both) ?
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:14:00 AM
Well done for being among my HMs, Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:44:00 AM
I'm so glad to receive the HM, Julia! I enjoyed this fantasy kingdom experience!
Date: 11/18/2015 10:54:00 PM
love the imagery in your poem good luck in the contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 4:48:00 AM
I'm so happy you love it! Thanks for your wishes!
Date: 11/12/2015 2:22:00 PM
Oooh this is a tantalising tale. Imagine an ocean over the Himalayas. The imagery is superb, and I assume it is a tale that has been passed down the generations orally? Folklore like that are just magical which adds to the story. Great write.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/13/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hi Mark! Welcome to my magical kingdom! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks or your kind visit!

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