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Fantasy Fish

Fantasy fish Innumerable desires are the fantasy fish, Floating directionless in ocean of my heart, As heart beats rhyme sending ripples hug each one close, Leave thence free afloat as some leap to quench while others drown, To the mind's rescue they rise high again Take few more dives but beyond realms of reality just keep bubbling and flourishing, Fantasy.... a reason to live and thrive Shun not those illusions, that add sugar to life, Who knows if they turn true and meet purpose of life !! Written Nov 29th, 2015 For contest by Julia Ward Awarded HM

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Date: 12/7/2015 3:42:00 PM
Really good take on the contest theme! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:53:00 AM
Fantastic, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations Dr Sharma another win!!
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:05:00 AM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:31:00 AM
Dr Upma, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest!Well deserved win..-lu *smiles*
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
I now see who wrote this. I'm glad you are among the HMs, Upma. Julia, :)
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Date: 12/2/2015 2:08:00 AM
nice upma
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:21:00 AM
Love your fantasy fish,,,excellent use of metaphor. It should do well in the contest, Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 11/30/2015 9:08:00 AM
kudos .... for penning down this wonderful piece.
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