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Fantasy Terzanelle Questionku

It starts as a simple thought that echoes in the brain  waiting for idealism sought Idealism starts the process train that brings forth the  fantasy  that echoes  in the brain To fantasise is to be free to imagine to feel totally That brings forth the fantasy to escape life's reality no holding back the desire to imagine to feel  totally I fantasise about the burning fire imagining it within me no holding back the desire No longer afraid, because you  see it starts as a simple thought imagining it within me waiting for idealism sought Lips touching lips Hands pulling off clothes... Ted's ear off, ring bearwatch

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Date: 1/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
Seren, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 5:43:00 PM
thanks Skat .......Seren
Date: 1/12/2013 3:21:00 AM
Smashing write Seren, and big congratulations on your winning spot once more my friend xx
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Mandy...Seren
Date: 1/12/2013 1:31:00 AM
Very nice!!! I love the build up and the aftermath. simple thought - powerful actions. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Vicky didnt find this an easy one.. Seren.
Date: 1/12/2013 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Seren, With short lines and the refrains syncing well eveywhere, and ending with a passionate questionku, it is simply a great write. !! Jag
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Jag for your congrats ....Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 9:50:00 PM
Seren.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:59:00 AM
Thank you PD
Date: 1/11/2013 7:58:00 PM
Congrads on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. ...Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations, I enjoyed your poems. Thanks for entry.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard ......Seren
Date: 12/12/2012 9:07:00 PM
way to edit girl. soup xx
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Date: 12/12/2012 1:16:00 PM
Sweet, fantasy Seren. - Luck in contest. - Wishing you a peaceful and lovely Christmas! (welcome to visit my Christmas poem) Biiig hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/13/2012 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise

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