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Fantasy

I choose you For all that you are I want you Like a dream I feel you In my arms I taste you In a tender kiss I hear you In the breeze I smell you In our embrace I see you In my fantasy I get you In reality

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/4/2009 10:03:00 PM
Lena - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/1/2009 7:47:00 AM
HEY!!! Stop that!! Congratulations Lolita on "Fantasy" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:23:00 PM
Nice work! Congratulations on a wonderful featured write! Love, shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:13:00 PM
The short lines work well in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 3/30/2009 11:41:00 AM
Sweet, tender poem..Congratulations on being featured this week! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:49:00 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Lolita.Rgds Brian
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