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Fantastic

Violet and light. Fantastic birds and white wolves are all around. The planets are closer and closer— bigger, golden, silver, red… and seraphim fly all around, playing little harps. I am laid on the Earth watching the black sky. Thousands and thousands of constellations, under the infinity of your existence. Am I the first woman who sees this Universe? When I look up into the stars I see your face, your body painted in God’s colours, floating in a midnight dream amidst time. The sound of the galaxy swallows my mind in divine musical notes. The infinite has the colour of love, And fantastic birds follow me everywhere, whispering your name. They form the rainbow in my hair. No, Sun, don’t kiss me now! Let my dream live!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/28/2013 6:58:00 PM
Congrats, Daniela. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/28/2013 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Ralph!
Date: 2/28/2013 6:21:00 AM
Your words settle like dew drops on soft petals of blushing red roses.
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/28/2013 9:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Michael!
Date: 2/27/2013 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/27/2013 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much David!
Date: 2/26/2013 8:58:00 PM
Daniela.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/26/2013 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda!
Date: 2/25/2013 6:18:00 AM
A real poet, I like the way you collect words and how you express the hidden emotions Regards
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/25/2013 7:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kanour! :)

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