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Here they comes! here they comes. every cow mooed... The ducks and hens leaving their drakes and cocks came screachng to see the flock of those, the tiny little crows. The king himself from his den, came at the screach of the hens. Mighty and strong stepping out between the crowd, Proud and happy of the little feloows, Those who shall fly over the meadows croack! croach! came the frong, to notify those gathered. The wind was light and the clouds were still.. Mother crocodile wept water called tears.. The pigeons and sparrows come in pairs to see the future come closer. The elephants stoodby in lines to trumpet for the little victory.. The cuckoo came by with a little surprise, a souvenier! A gift from a far offtree, across whom they may fly, pieces of pear to eat along the way.. The littles of crows, Brought pride to their race.. By a beautiful take off.. Far far away from the sky, the view all those down lookup to them now.. All the animals waved good bye! and split away one by one, while among the little said, 'one day we will be the crows with pride..and one day we will be the ones to see out littles fly..like fan's viewing the sky'. by Manthra

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Date: 8/30/2015 12:35:00 AM
Wonderful write Manthra, kids would sure love this ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:34:00 PM
A delightful end to the tale. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 8/29/2015 12:14:00 PM
Very nice poem Manthra.. congrats.. see you soon as No ONE. Keep it up.. If you are planning to release book, I will be glad to publish the same..
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:10:00 AM
a charming story many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2015 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your top ten finish.
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Date: 8/29/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you very much!
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Date: 8/29/2015 8:02:00 AM
Fun and imaginative, grats on your win.
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