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Fancy's Flight

A lass named Fancy found herself forlorn, for in her world, the hues like gray and brown prevailed, so Fancy wanted to adorn herself with colors: boredom weighed her down! Her people shunned bright objects and deplored the colors’ burst of rainbows in their sky. However, such rare arches she adored, so Fancy wished for wings that she might fly. . . She sat and pondered; then a feathered quill came drifting down; she wrote, and poetry sprang forth! With joy, her heart began to fill as imagery replaced monotony! Though Fancy wore no wings, she FELT them there; She realized no longer would she thirst for beauty, for her words soared through the air. That flight of fancy came with colors’ burst! Written 5/19/14 by Andrea Dietrich for the Imagination Contest of Dave Wood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/16/2015 12:42:00 AM
Grok this! Beautifully done and so delightful both in the adventure told and the colorful words in your pallet! Enjoyed this very much! ~Paint On~ Edlynn
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:18:00 AM
This is so heartwarming Andrea. Your imagination soars! Congratulations on your first place in the contest!
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:43:00 PM
Beautiful:)
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Date: 5/29/2014 7:25:00 PM
Amazing write and great win.. Congrats!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:26:00 PM
nice win Andrea...PD
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:04:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on coming 1st in both contests. Expertly constructed and a delight to read. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:25:00 PM
An imagination which seems came into real with your very creative words my very dear friend Andrea. Thank u so much for sharing and big warm congratulations on this shining win and the other recent wins as well! Many, many hugs and cheers! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:25:00 AM
a dreamy personification of fancy, andie... for this amazing poem, my sweet congrats and huggs
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Date: 5/28/2014 9:18:00 AM
Very creative...as usual your faithful muse hovers lovingly by your side! Love your flight of fancy and the imagery. Congrats on a deserved top winning spot! // paul
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:03:00 AM
enjoyed rereading this Andrea congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:20:00 AM
:) I imagine a painter on 2nd stanza while on the last I imagine one poet..:) words soared through the air..:D!!! Funny but well it does for us who loves poetry..:)Congratulations Andrea!!!!!! GBU
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Date: 5/28/2014 2:29:00 AM
Fabulous write Andrea congrats on your top spot. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:10:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Andrea
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:45:00 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug...
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:13:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea ! Imagination shines,, very creative worth top win ! Huge congrats !
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, a poem filled with fancy imagination, well deserved win
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:29:00 PM
Andrea this is such a good poem, congrats. U deserve the top spot....Seren
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:34:00 PM
Poetry releases Fancy! NICE!
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:09:00 AM
Impressive poem Andrea. Thanks for all your wonderful comments on my poems in the past. It was indeed a pleasure to receive your kind encouraging words.
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:21:00 PM
I feel like I know her! You did a marvelous job with the imagination theme. Very clever, Andrea! I wouldn't be surprised to see this poem at the top of the winner's list! Good luck to you!.... Thank you for the kind congrats, by the way.
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Date: 5/24/2014 5:42:00 AM
Now this is a true flight of imagination, soaring high. You will be in the winner's circle again.
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Date: 5/23/2014 11:16:00 AM
Great imaginary on this one. I liked it. It will do great in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Many blessings... Lucilla
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Date: 5/23/2014 7:11:00 AM
Wowzy, wow, wowzer! I absolutely love this one. You Rock Andrea.
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Date: 5/23/2014 5:48:00 AM
what a wondrous flight of fancy Andrea it will do well gl in contest hugs
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Date: 5/23/2014 5:45:00 AM
Flows like French wine in Paris as usual.
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