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Fanciful Visions

A thought flew by I tried to snatch it But from the air I just could not grab it Next floats an image along the banks of my brain Yet when I try to recall it it slips down the drain Then ‘fore my eyes a rainstorm furious its pellets, slit-slanted its form -- O, to trap her lightning in a bottle yet though I lunge, she's going full throttle… Seems I just haven’t much luck with fanciful visions I would pluck My lithe and limber fingers gnarl up… Stop saying ‘Timber’ ~ they’re stuck

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Date: 4/3/2024 6:33:00 PM
Unique and creative, Gershon poetry. I enjoy reading your poetry, gw. Have a great week, my friend. BB
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Date: 4/3/2024 7:49:00 PM
Bill, I really appreciate this comment. It's so nice to know that someone out there in Soup-land enjoys one's attempts. Thanks a million, Gershon
Date: 4/3/2024 5:29:00 PM
A clever poem, my friend. Sometimes, it seems like my inspiration loves to play jokes on me.
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Date: 4/3/2024 3:25:00 PM
Welcome to my brain, GW. I’d bet many here will sympathise your torment. Enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 4/3/2024 7:48:00 PM
I know what you mean, Terry. My brain is your brain. Your brain is my brain. We're both nuts. ~ Ku-ku-ka-choo, I am the Walrus
Date: 4/3/2024 11:37:00 AM
A great poem. Give up on the elusive and aim for the attainable. Ending was very good.
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Date: 4/3/2024 10:28:00 AM
Many a vision I've reached for GW, your fun and witty poem shows just how elusive they can be! Keep Trying!! Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 4/3/2024 6:46:00 AM
Well written Gershon! :)
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Date: 4/3/2024 5:55:00 AM
oh so witty and a delightful rhyme scheme. I especially liked 'Timber' they're stuck. smiles :-) Sara
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