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Adam and Eve met, for the very first time Adam felt a flush but wasn’t sure if it was a crime God explained to Adam that it was perfectly okay To feel what he was feeling, as He had made him that way Eve when she saw Adam, noticed he needed a shave She wasn’t too impressed, she wasn’t going to rave The garden needed attention the food store was bare She asked God if she had too, she didn’t think it fair. God taught Adam how to shave and helped him sew a fig leaf The trouble is when he saw Eve; it kept lifting giving him grief Eve refused Adam’s advances unless the lawn was cut neat But she agreed to do her duty if he’d first let her warm her feet. Adam and Eve came together God’s plan to fill the world had started The couple grew close to God, until the snake had them parted He told Eve she would be like God and know the good from bad Eve told Adam about it and he listened to her which was sad. The moral of this tale is when you are in a pretty garden If a man does approach you with things that seem to harden Remember the snake in Eden and pick up something you can use And beat that snake so hard cos it’s not only paradise you may lose. © 10/04/2013~GG~ Famous Couple contest : Adam and Eve

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Date: 4/15/2013 8:58:00 PM
Mandy, Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:47:00 PM
OMG good one Goldie, hope you are having a nice rest, and don't beat that snake too hard! [who knows could be an s & m snake?] Congrad's on your win. Light 7 Love
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:54:00 PM
Congrats, Mandy. Excellent. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
Yeah! I enjoyed this... Lovely~ A.O
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:21:00 PM
Congrats
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 4/12/2013 12:03:00 PM
And thanks for the lesson... Well received~A.O
Date: 4/12/2013 5:37:00 AM
Congrats , very nicely written. I enjoyed remembering our 2 first couples. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Terry xx
Date: 4/11/2013 10:52:00 PM
Many congrats dear friend for this win.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/12/2013 5:51:00 AM
xx
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM
Bless you Taherea
Date: 4/11/2013 1:27:00 PM
Naughty, naughty. I loved it. I've got one for you, too. Check it out. I think you'll know which one.... Congratulations!
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Roy I think !!! xx
Date: 4/11/2013 5:53:00 AM
Lol Mandy, What a naughty write, loved it though. Congratulations in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:49:00 AM
naughty moi never lol xx
Date: 4/11/2013 4:33:00 AM
haha congrats on your win in the contest with this witty one :)
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:48:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte xx
Date: 4/11/2013 12:33:00 AM
hahaha. You naughty girl, you!! I enjoyed your poem top to bottom. Hilarious, Mandy. This in my book is good poetry. You should have been placed higher but no mind. Congratulations with your placement anyway. :)
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:11:00 AM
Ha than ks and I agree with you about the higher place lol, just joking but I am happy you enjoyed this one xx
Date: 4/10/2013 11:11:00 PM
My Dear Sister Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS(Ours) Healthy and High in the Spirit.Congratulations On YOUR Well Deserved Win in Heather Ober's Contest "Famous Couplels/Duos"The First Famous Couple.You can certainly elaborate on the Moral of the story Great Lines. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother...Harry
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 4/11/2013 1:10:00 AM
Hi there bro, and thank for you continued support will soup you later today bro xx
Date: 4/10/2013 11:08:00 PM
wow!!!! a very fantastic write my friend Mandy!!! like it...you make me laugh while reading this poem of yours. congratulations!!! have a blessed day to you.. (^___^) Maria
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:10:00 AM
And you too Maria love have a brilliant week and thanks xx
Date: 4/10/2013 9:10:00 PM
Ha ha ha very clever one of my personal favorites. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Richard xx
Date: 4/10/2013 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations on choosing that first pair for your entry. I loved it. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Joyce xx
Date: 4/10/2013 6:41:00 PM
congrats on your win with this humorous piece Mandy
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 4/10/2013 5:45:00 PM
hilarious, mandy! love your sly little references...
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM
Bless you Ilene xx
Date: 4/10/2013 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations Mandy...loved your Adam and Eve!
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:08:00 AM
Thanks Donna xx
Date: 4/10/2013 11:06:00 AM
Heather's right...you rocked this poem! Congrats!
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:07:00 AM
Thanks Caleb xx
Date: 4/10/2013 9:42:00 AM
You took on the intimidating task of describing the ORIGINAL couple, and you rocked it! This poem is hilarious, Mandy. I truly loved reading it. Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:07:00 AM
Thanks for my place Heather, I enjoyed this one too xx
Date: 4/10/2013 9:18:00 AM
Well done Mandy. ...Loved it.....Seren..
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Date: 4/11/2013 1:07:00 AM
Thanks Seren , keep in touch xx
Date: 4/10/2013 6:00:00 AM
this is a classic, Mandy, again subject matter brilliant, and that last verse, should be painted framed and hung in an art gallery,,, it is so visual,,,
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/10/2013 8:45:00 AM
you sure have never lived in Australia, and the really bad part is once bitten one as to be able to describe the snake so the correct anti venom is given...at my age we have senior moments Ha Ha
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Date: 4/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
ha ha thanks harry, I never seen a snake in a garden before lol xx
Date: 4/10/2013 5:47:00 AM
Mandy this is so cute.....good luck in the contest...Donna
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