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My home was like a madhouse Sister and brother in law came to stay Bringing with them  2 boxers and a terrier Tilly* thought it was xmas day She is an old lady but  you wouldn't  think so She and Boris a terrier were racing here and there Was like she had a rocket up her butt She is 34 kg he a mere 10  an unlikely pair Silence reigns again cos home they have gone I vacuumed the floor and steamed them Cos half of the garden mud appeared upon All evidence of fun times and utter mayhem Its great to have visitors i must agree The chaos it causes adds to the fun Too much to eat , to many cups of coffee Next time hooray, it will be their home, *Tilly is my 9 year old rescue Boxer who is vastly overweight. Boris is a Westie x a year old .

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Date: 2/20/2013 10:20:00 PM
this is such a cute story, Seren. It's wonderful to have visitors. I remember when I had my little Eskimo dog. He was so hyper. If I had had a relative try to bring another dog into the house with that over protective dog of mine (so territorial he was) it would have been a catastrophe. Anyway, your family sounds like great fun!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 5:14:00 AM
Well Tilly doesnt really like small dogs she puts Boris in his place then are fine friends.
Date: 2/20/2013 2:35:00 PM
Seren it sounded a bit chaotic, fun but noisy...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 5:13:00 AM
it was chaotic plus lol. but the dogs all get on, poor tilly she can hardly walk after they go back, her legs arent so good, she is an old lady, that thinks she is a puppy when other dogs here.
Date: 2/18/2013 5:14:00 PM
What a fun way to describe their visit. I wonder if they'll have a story on the Soup after you visit! Haha.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/18/2013 5:21:00 PM
hehehe possibly, Hey wait a minute I am so quiet what on earth could they say
Date: 2/18/2013 7:17:00 AM
What a sincere piece? You have painted the hidden pix of many hearts. Cheers.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/18/2013 5:22:00 PM
thank you Fisayo
Date: 2/18/2013 5:18:00 AM
This is a tremendous write my friend, I loved what you have done for this poem, very wonderful Seren! What a spectacular piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/18/2013 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Russell

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