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Family Tree

The last maple leaf Fell from the maple tree, It didn't want to leave it's home But it had no choice you see. It was almost Winter In this little town, This little leaf had to go No more to be around. It fell upon the snow so soft Which glistened in the sun, Mother nature told this leaf You will have a new day in the sun. The crumpled little maple leaf Wondered how this could be, I produced a crimson glow When September came on me. How can I be a pretty green When spring arrives again, Nature smiled upon the leaf For you it's not the end. You left behind upon the tree Such tiny little buds, Life for you is not over, Your family tree has just begun. Lynn Barany

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Date: 10/4/2012 1:20:00 AM
That was lovely lynn, I especially love the topic of nature! Once again you knock one outa the park!!! Brilliantly written and I agree with other soup members I loved your flow too! Congrats xoxoxoxo
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Date: 10/2/2012 12:59:00 PM
A lovely poem, very well written Lynn. Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, I sure like feedback, and it's nice of you to take the time. I certainly appreciate it. Lynn Barany
Date: 9/30/2012 9:38:00 AM
loved the flow, loved the poem, loved the topic. Good piece. Well done.
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Lynn Hanna Barany
Date: 9/30/2012 10:06:00 AM
Hi Jon, thanks so much, very kind of you. Feedback gives me inspiration, as you know poets are a little insecure at times, at least I am. I'm on Twitter @Lynn Barany
Date: 9/29/2012 10:20:00 PM
enjoyed the flow,wonderfully written Lynn
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