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Lying on my stomach in the summer sun, Wind and water became my best friend. Enjoying the last day of our vacation, And asking myself, why this all must end. I hear the waves now crashing on the shoreline Begging me arise and come on in. Lazily I think, just one more moment, And try to fall asleep here once again. All at once I’m wakened with a feeling Like someone stuck a thousand knives in me. I jump up shocked and gasping not expecting; My two sons running, laughing full of glee. Each one with empty pail in hand excited Knowing now the game had just begun, For mommy coming, roaring like a tiger Can only mean it’s time to have some fun. Daddy follows suit and runs behind us Grabbing them he lifts both in the air, Then all of us go diving in the water Splashing sending warped beads everywhere. The droplets looked like crystals in the sunlight, We stay all day just soaking in the fun, Too soon it’s time to pack the car and go home But not before we watch the setting sun. Just four short weeks since at the seashore, September brought us leaves of orange and red. Today we walk together in our forest, Enjoying now the pleasures here instead. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 08.30.2014 For contest Summer's End 2nd

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Date: 9/17/2014 5:19:00 AM
- I love spring and summer .... - Autumn is great, but the winter is loooong and daaark :) - However, we have to enjoy it when it's here - time passes too quickly - Lovely poem, Brenda - Congratulations on your win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:03:00 AM
Enjoyed this fine nostalgic write, congrats on the win, Brenda
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Date: 9/16/2014 10:15:00 PM
Hi Brenda, This is a very exciting, full of life, action packed poem. Very well done. Congratulations on your win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:13:00 PM
The simple pleasures in life often become the times that we remember most. Your poem has a very nostalgic feel to it. I especially enjoyed the last stanza.... A lovely write, Brenda! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/16/2014 7:24:00 PM
wonderful imagery Brenda - can't believe i missed reading this little gem. many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:16:00 AM
This is very well written and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:24:00 PM
Brenda, awesome write for this contest. Verlena
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/31/2014 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting Verlena.
Date: 8/30/2014 8:35:00 PM
Brenda, next time take me----I'll bring my own bucket. LOL
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/30/2014 9:28:00 PM
OK Jerry. I couldn't chase you anymore though. ;-).

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