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Family On the Rocks

By Carolyn Devonshire
casting my line from a rock jetty sad, high-pitch cry I hear glance around, see no one cast again but the cry echoes as if reverberating in the rocks fishing pole I lay down now searching every crevice suddenly a wee feline springs forth mewing alone atop the stone from where she emerged, I look down a litter of six cradled by their mama so thin the mother cat appears no food nearby and tears fill my eyes return to my cooler, retrieving three trout place them in the cranny mama cat meows softly no thanks were needed feeding frenzy begins for the kittens mama cat remains still, but purrs providing nourishment for her clan more important than feeding herself wish the brotherhood of man could learn from mama cat cries of hunger go unheard
*Entry for Michael’s “Sounds of a Cry” contest Based on a true experience

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/27/2011 2:55:00 PM
Two featured poemsfor you this week my friend. Congratulations Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:40:00 PM
We all could learn a lot. Animals love without conditions attached. Congrats on another feature. Vince
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Date: 8/20/2011 11:42:00 AM
This is really good, Carolyn. Can't believe I missed it earlier. I can't even remember if and when this contest was ever judged. Ok, now it's coming to me!! It got judged a while back and looking down here, I see you scored HIGH. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:37:00 AM
Soupmail :)
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Date: 8/10/2011 8:19:00 PM
So many unwanted and hungry its very sad and yet you should see all the hoops I had to go through to get my Smokey! KInd heart!!! Light & Love
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Date: 8/7/2011 5:43:00 PM
I'm real glad you took first place with this one. I think it's one of your best poems. Congratulations, Diane
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Date: 8/5/2011 3:11:00 PM
This sure is such a touching take on "cry"- really liked that you wrote about learning from cats & wow even more so that this really happened! I see congrats are in order as well ;) & thank you for your sweet comments in my collab with Chris, I had a great time writing that with him :) as for the italics, all together put in the < & i then close it with > & at the end of the line which you want italicized, put in < then / then i then > sorry had to do this way since it comes up as an error hugs
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Date: 8/4/2011 7:20:00 PM
Can't agree More Carolyn, good words today..
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Date: 8/4/2011 7:17:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Yes, everyday children go to bed hungry not just in other countries but in our country the USA..Thanks for stopping by my blog, reading, and leaving a comment..Just a few more days and Princess' tail should heal if she will just leave it alone....Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:40:00 AM
Nice one with this winner , Carolyn. Enjoyed the narrative story line blessing to you Paul
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Date: 8/4/2011 5:44:00 AM
I don't like cats as they do not agree with my allergies...but something about this poem got me. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/4/2011 4:37:00 AM
Very emotional! Many congrats on your well deserved first place win
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:44:00 AM
hey Carolyn, congrats on a great win, David
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:08:00 AM
congratulations! you spun the story aptly with emotions and rhymes
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:30:00 AM
Oh how true the words "crys of hunger go unheard". Congratulations on your first place win. Well deserved.
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:22:00 PM
I loved the last line and the way you put this forth is truly amazing. we humans surely need to learn a lot from our animal friends. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:40:00 PM
Oh Carolyn, dear you. Poor little kitty with no food to feed her babies and you are there. I love the sentiment here, so moving.
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem and picture of mother love. Congratulations on your no. 1 again Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:18:00 PM
Excellent 1st place win Carolyn, I knew it was a winner when I laid eyes on it awhile back :)
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:54:00 PM
Love the story very much Carolyn...nice message at the end...best wishes...visit me:
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:12:00 PM
wonderful message in this one carolyn. love the last line. even though i know there are hungry people in the u.s., I still picture an emaciated person from a 3rd world country, like all those commercials they used to play on t.v. asking for 23 cents a day. anyway, i'm happy you were able to help the cat and kittens. good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:34:00 AM
What a lovely story, my friend - great poem too - sure to be a big winner
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:22:00 PM
Wonderful approach to the theme of the contest, carolyn
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Date: 8/1/2011 7:14:00 PM
Such a loving write and gesture by yourself Carolyn ! How so true your words dear poet. A touching entry for Michael's contest love ! Have a wonderful night Carolyn....much love(2u), james
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Date: 8/1/2011 7:16:00 PM
Me O my, what a lightning storm we just went through Carolyn ! Wow ! A lightning bolt slaped down so close to me and my friend just a few minutes ago, it leveled my garden ! Dang !
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