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Family Dynamics

On the surface, things are fine; Smiles are filled with teeth, But you never really know What's roiling underneath. Sometimes tiny fissures form Releasing and revealing Resentments tucked away that you Believed were long past healing. Moving forward there's a choice - To deal or to pretend, But talking is the only way That there's a chance to mend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/31/2015 10:13:00 AM
Classy poem Ilene. Nice flow.
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:57:00 AM
Great advice Ilene...and so ably offered in verse.
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:22:00 PM
AMEN, my dear. I'm all for talking things through...Sometimes my family would prefer I kept my mouth shut! ;) I tend to want to talk when I'm fuming. Not the best. Lovely poem full of wisdom . Hugs
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:57:00 PM
Such wise words Ilene I am sure many of us can relate to this is some way or other - I know I can im my family:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:53:00 PM
Good wisdom in this poem, Ilene. Nicely written, too!
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Date: 1/30/2015 2:07:00 PM
A family is in constant flux. When they hurt eachother, it really sucks. But time and situations can turn things all around. Even when no one is talking, you still can hear that sound. Peace. :)
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