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FAMILY TREE A storm was threatening all week The tree was a warning to see The wind rocked our tree’s roots weak . Not our best, but son’s favourite tree. We’d had a fall-out about his girlfriend. Not speaking, we were anger-split. But wind picked up and we had to attend To the weakness of his favourite. With ropes and sturdy stakes we fought We got our bonds tied rightly My boy climbed up and pulled them taut He tied our branches tightly From tree to tree, some to ground. His father held the straining ropes While he drove in the stakes around. Staking everything on slimmest hopes Furious wind the night throughout Tree a-straining our ties, our knot. Next morning our tree’d fallen out From weakened roots; but we had not .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/12/2010 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:04:00 PM
GReat analogy, Sydney, And congratulations on your place in the contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2010 7:02:00 AM
The family "tree" shaking! What a clever analogy, Sydney. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sydney in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 4:13:00 AM
congradulations on your entry. john
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:47:00 PM
Sydeny-Many Congrats for big win in contest.... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:50:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your big win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry .. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/16/2010 3:02:00 PM
Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Sydney. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2010 3:50:00 AM
I can empathise with this lovely piece - beautifully written. Liz
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