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Father, mother and child From God’s Love, they unite Flourished by extension First value foundation Fortress in doubts and fears Fundamental unit For me, first and last breath Sept. 24, 2016 11:09pm ©2016Leonora Galinta Second Place Contest: Pleiades F Judged: 2/26/2016 Sponsor: Poet Kim Merryman - a try of pleiades form of poem. hope i did it right

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2016 4:12:00 PM

Hi Leonora, you not only did it right, but it also found a merited spot on the winners' list! A family with good values goes a long way in making our life a success. ~ Congratulations and hugs ~ paul

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:55:00 AM

You are right my dear friend, Paul. It's in the family where values are formed. Thank you so much. Congratulations as well. I'll visit you and the other's soon. Just dropping by for a while here while waiting for my friends who're going to the airport. I'll be the one to send them. Again, thanks a lot! Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2016 2:58:00 PM

the final line says it all. I Hope you can keep up with all the letters of the alphabet doing this form, Leonora. It's so fun to do these and see what everyone comes up with.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:50:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Andrea. I'll try other letters when I've time. Time is too elusive for my passion this time. Hope soon, I can. Tcare always. Hugs!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/27/2016 7:57:00 AM

So true, and truly beautiful poetry, Leonora.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:43:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Harry! Hugs.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/27/2016 6:08:00 AM

Excellent and well done. Congrats on your winning poem.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:42:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great wins poems - First attempt ... and a great 2nd place, dear Leonora !!! - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:40:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Anne Lise! My attention was also caught at once on this wonderful new form, so I tried to compose using one of my life inspirations as my topic, family. I know you did well too and congratulations my dear Sunshine! Hugs.

Tom Quigley

Date: 9/26/2016 8:53:00 PM

Nicely done! Congrats!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:31:00 AM

Thanks a lot my dear friend. Hugs.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:15:00 PM

Many congrats Leonora:-) hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:31:00 AM

Thanks a lot my dear friend. Hugs!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/26/2016 4:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win,Galeo.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:28:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend. Hugs!

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 4:30:00 PM

Lenora, you penned a beautiful family picture. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your loving acknowledgement and appreciation on my poem in your contest my dear friend, Kim. Thanks a lot for inspiring me to write as well. You've introduced to us a very fine form of poetry. I love it.

Jean Murray

Date: 9/26/2016 4:05:00 PM

My FAMILY friend. Well done!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/4/2016 6:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Jean! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2016 6:12:00 AM

- Beautiful with a lot of love, dear Leonora :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 9/26/2016 10:16:00 AM

I'll try my best to be back tomorrow and visit you again and others here my loving friend, coz I got painful gums tonight due to my removed molar tooth. God bless!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/26/2016 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for gracing my poem with your loving visit, comment and good luck wishes my very dear friend. Anne Lise.I appreciate it so much. Have a wonderful week! Many hugs to you from me.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2016 11:45:00 PM

this is a lovely Gem, my sweet friend, SIS.... Family is everything from start to end... Please and happy to read.... always and forever, your BFF LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 9/26/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for gracing my latest poem with your loving visit and comment myforever dearest sis and BFF! I appreciate it so much. I just came back home my dearest sis from the dentist and got a pain again. I will sleep in a while. HUGs, smiles and kisses to you! tytyssm!