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Falter

I watch a single girl falter when her face falls her costume becomes parody trying too hard she transforms awkward and moves away tucks into herself toward invisibility dont listen to an invisible older woman with a turn you could be fabulous

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Date: 9/6/2011 9:07:00 PM
good advice to the teenagers... would that their mothers would take it! preesh the write, Veronica. happy eve~N
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Veronica Joseph
Date: 9/11/2011 11:51:00 AM
Amen!

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