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Falsehood

Fitting like second skin, far better than what he finds in the closet. Now feathered, a Mardi Gras; floating on dance of lies. False hopes of romance masked, For this man's lonely schemes. Written by Gabby Sabre Let's Pleaides---nette onclaud 4. 25. 2014

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Date: 5/6/2014 11:41:00 AM
Hi Gabby, a deep poem... we are twisted.. love this one... Linda
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Date: 5/1/2014 8:39:00 PM
Loved the enjambment! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:37:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!! :)fitting for the win indeed :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 5:58:00 AM
A fitting win Gabby; a quality write; congrats. // paul
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Date: 5/1/2014 5:54:00 AM
Beautiful write on the theme ! Gabby nice take wid this n so is the great win ! congrats !
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Date: 5/1/2014 4:51:00 AM
just the sort of quality piece that i wanted; you made me feel the character 's pain, gabby.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:55:00 AM
Safe to get into a mask now!
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