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False Lover

He turned away at end of day From his promise to wed. With loathsome smile, nothing but vile, Denied what he had said. “I’ll return home, from which I roam, To wife who waits for me. You should forget we ever met, I’ll not your future be.” I sadly cried, said he had lied, He patted my bent back. “Oh little one, it has been fun. But you’re getting the sack.” Feeling so bad, I called my dad, Told him my love had lied. He came so fast with gun to blast The one for whom I’d sighed. In steady voice, said, “You’ve a choice You’ll either run or die. No man does live, whom I’ll forgive For making my girl cry”. I beg young miss, take heed from this And do not give your trust To him who’d bed before you’re wed. That wedding ring’s a must.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/25/2013 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2013 1:33:00 PM
Joyce congrats on your well deserve win. Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 9:09:00 PM
Good job on this one Joyce! Enjoyed reading. Congrats.
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:52:00 PM
Oh my, Joyce...so beautifully done and I'm in dreadful and deathly fear of your Daddy's gun!... Congrats on your win in this challanging and difficult contest - Tim
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:04:00 PM
this is REALLY good, JOyce. I don't quite recall the rules of this contest but I know I didn't do it because it scared me! Kudos to you and congrats.
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Date: 2/22/2013 2:01:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:45:00 AM
Hi congratulations once more Joyce, another well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:36:00 PM
I loved it! And, as a father who raised a daughter, I can support your message! Or at least resemble it! HA! But, a younger heart that once beat within my chest may have disagreed!! RAY
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:30:00 PM
Love your winning poem Joyce...pd
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Date: 2/21/2013 7:33:00 PM
Nice job, Joyce. Congratulations! Sounds like some dads I knew back in the day!
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Date: 1/21/2013 6:44:00 PM
This is so smoothly said with wisdom that is likely to be ignored. I enjoyed the story.
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Date: 1/21/2013 2:32:00 PM
wonderful poem, joyce! i don't know if i agree with your message at the end, but i love the way you've written it...
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:10:00 AM
Oh Joyce i don't know if to laugh or cry because it has strong elements of anguish and comedy. That last four lines are a doozy, just love this xx
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