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Fall's Angular Sun

The sun rises south A little later each day Fall's angular sun As a chill tinges each leaf Blue Jay sings thanks_eats acorns

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 1:10:00 AM

Very nice!! I see you went tanka crazy. I love reading lots of little ones like these.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 4:45:00 PM

So much to be thankful for in this lovely season. Seems the best is always before the worst but your words keep the season alive.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/11/2012 1:07:00 PM

lovely vignettes of the season through your vivid illustrations, sara.. winning wishes and huggs..:)

Stephen Parker

Date: 10/11/2012 12:40:00 PM

Nice, nature symphony. Fall comes to life in the last two lines of your poem.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2012 12:30:00 PM

Wow, the beauty that exuded from this incredible Tanka is exemplary my friend! I really enjoyed this fully delightful poem! I love the way you integrated Autumn within the natural landscape, a lovely entry into the contest(or should be an entry anyway)! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 10/11/2012 11:36:00 AM

Sara I like this with the split....David