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Falling Time

falling time sitting at peace the world far away stopped at the property line when I returned dinner was quick more like a summer lunch eaten with relish of sun setting through wind haggard trees the last wild geese call voices eager to be away follow the warmth south to waiting fields of sweet grass already this year is near to a memory it is falling time thoughts like leaves drift and dance landing in a crackling heap then stillness, unnoticed at first, rolls through me as it passes from darkening limbs; the settling sun seems to suck the sounds down over the edge of the world I close my eyes and dive after it into its new day somewhere beyond where Spring is just awakening.

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Date: 10/27/2017 9:50:00 AM
Triple wowsa. Bittersweet. My fave season, but followed by my least fave. You remind this reader to take a mental short cut to spring. Cycles do. And will. No use me pouting about it ;-0 Beautiful poem, I thoroughly enjoy looking at the world through your eyes ~ john
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:01:00 AM
This is gorgeous. Brimming with feeling.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/27/2017 9:25:00 AM
Good morning Dale thank you for your comment.
Date: 10/27/2017 8:01:00 AM
Spring...what a marvelous time of year -- the vibrant splendour of it all! But there again...all seasons have their qualities; as your many other poems so admirably demonstrate even harsh Winter can be beautiful beyond reproach! Always enjoy your poetry, Patricia. Tonight, when I take my first break, I will read a little more. Your friend, Patricia. :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/27/2017 9:40:00 AM
Hi J ohn, how was your shift. I guess it is true about beauty in the eye of the beholder. Thank you for reading my work and commenting. How are you doing with your poems are they still giving you trouble? Just like children sometimes.
Date: 10/27/2017 7:45:00 AM
I can feel time among the words and between the lines. Falling is like a quiet noise in the poet's heart. Nonetheless, Spring is uplifting. A very nice piece.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/27/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Runping Chen. for reading and leaving your thoughts about my work. I am looking forward to your next piece.
Date: 10/27/2017 4:26:00 AM
Beautiful, I love the allusions between life and the desire to leave Autumn to brighter days of Spring! I surely enjoyed reading this tremendous poem here this morning! You have impressed me beyond all delight by your incredible piece! What a remarkable write my friend! Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/27/2017 9:51:00 AM
It was just a short time of wanting to leave. I am afraid this year is quite different from others as my mobility is very restricted and winter here gives no quarter. Thank you for stopping by I look forward to your thoughts on my work.

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