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Falling Through the Cosmos

Wherever I happen to fall The cosmos Through the sky My last breath before I die Will be within space Russell Sivey Form: Shadorma

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Don Johnson

Date: 2/10/2012 7:33:00 PM

ride upon a shooting star, plummet falling travel far, beyond the far horizon... nah i aint sermonising...nah.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2012 12:56:00 PM

devastatingly graceful in form and content, russel.. you last two lines capture the essence of your theme... delighted! :) hugggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 9:32:00 AM

What a wonderful day I am having sitting here reading such amazing poetry. I am glad yours is amongst the ones I am enjoying reading today Russell. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you have an inspirational weekend. Love, Carol

Tracy Edwards

Date: 2/10/2012 5:02:00 AM

Free falling hey Russell...just make sure you have someone to catch you xxx