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It snowed and snowed the day that I was born, and for that reason I love F A L L I N G snow; in dreams, I walk the frozen woods till morn, and from my pen the words just drip and flow. Since childhood I've been still and I've been odd, choosing to read old books and write my words; in nature, I would wander and be awed, while loving songs and beauty of sweet birds. The snow is falling softly this long night, I chant a song- to keep the ghosts away; and T E A R S are falling, falling till first light. Can they not stay in tombs in their decay? Can they just please, just go away, away, and leave my soul and heart in peace to pray? _________________________ November 19, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/"FALLING TEARS'' Copyright Protected, ID 16-851-425-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Sonnet sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 11/26/2016 4:30:00 PM
Broken Wings, I love the rhythm in this poem, your joy, your love, and your sadness. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/21/2016 10:27:00 AM
Mourning has its place. Especially when what's lost was something of value. So it is a tribute to your soul that you are the way you are. I hope your days can be offset with smiles. Such is the curse of your gift.
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Date: 11/20/2016 10:07:00 PM
What a great start to a great poem! Born morn, snow flow, wow simple yet powerful ryhme. A Glorious write to a powerful poem, great job Broken WIngs! xoxo
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Date: 11/20/2016 5:32:00 PM
I'm completely in love with this poem cause sad poems is my favorite actually I think that sad poems is a source of strength cause the poet is able to get touch with his soul and his heart from very deep down and get it all out so great write my dear enjoyed every line , hugs / / :)
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Date: 11/20/2016 7:15:00 AM
Lovely though sad sonnet, Well written a joy to read.
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