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Falling Star

Shining a star twinkling thoughts faraway in distance skies One true friend who dazzles memories with light brown eyes misting jewels falling rain lonely weeping in loves chapel Upon your chest I lay a silver gem whisper oh most blessed ground soft gentle petals Heart enchanting your beauty opens beats truth be told darling in honesty blooming beautiful friendship plays strings tugging on the deepest organ I hear a silence in words blinding blizzard of snow falling cold laying a carpet upon the ground sweeping daydreams looking across golden sands One deep bond the reality just sang felt holding hands binding bound drowning in sorrow Failing love holding you in every last breath who sits with the angels don't take my life's beauty away from me Defending your honor and grace regal with every last drop of blood inside speaks within council chambers echo magic pure regal beautiful

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Date: 12/28/2014 10:38:00 PM
Truly brilliant free verse my friend.. Beautiful words send beautiful message. All great but last stanza is my favorite.. A gem my friend, a true gem..... 7
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:09:00 AM
wow, he is painted so beautifully in this poem. what wonderful imagery.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/24/2014 2:57:00 PM
thank you so kindly andrea i drew this one with deep thought smiling wishing you and your family dear friend a happy christmas
Date: 12/21/2014 4:03:00 PM
Liam, I feel the magic and love in this write! Beautiful. Meg
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/22/2014 10:23:00 AM
thank you kindly meg for the beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 12/21/2014 11:08:00 AM
I hope the one for you will be there always Liam~my dear friend.Have a merrry merry Christmas B-)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/21/2014 11:16:00 AM
hope is a beautiful light charmaine i pray one day in salvation of true meaning and purity in the end wonderful comment dear pal wishing you and your family a blessed christmas
Date: 12/21/2014 10:21:00 AM
Interesting the last line too. -Safa
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/21/2014 10:26:00 AM
safa thank you dear friend for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/21/2014 9:26:00 AM
Liam, This is one is really great!! You've hit the target again with both your verse and quite powerful imagery. "The Leprechaun Choir" will be singing songs of tears and praise on this one Mate!! Good on Ya!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/21/2014 9:36:00 AM
smiling gary this just poured beautiful leprechaun magic dear pal thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

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