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Falling Star

The moon awaken

me one night

while shinning

on me as I looked

out my window

to see a wonderful

sight in the distant

sky was a falling


Written 6-23-11

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  1. Date: 7/11/2011 7:19:00 AM
    Good morning, James,,., how are you? And yes this time I missed you and alot of other poets. I sure missed your poetry as well, glad to have stopped by take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:07:00 AM
    Oooooo! Quick! Make a wish! I love looking at the night sky. Here in the Great North we have the Northern Lights that play in the Autumn sky at night. It's so lovely. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 5:17:00 AM
    hoping u made a wish on that falling star James as it is a sign of good luck luv.. another imaginative write ...

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 2:48:00 PM
    Extraordinary beauty in its simplicity!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:29:00 PM
    An awesome sight indeed. Nice write, James, although i would like to see your lines cut a different way, in order to bring out a rhyming scheme. For ex, "the moon awakened me/one night/as it was shining on me/so bright. (perhaps another stanza here) I looked out my window to see/a wonderful sight/rarely seen/up in the distant sky/a falling star. Just a suggestion. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 4:56:00 PM
    This was so creative and such a nice picture you painted. cory

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 2:24:00 PM
    What a beautiful sight indeed, James. They say over here that you should make a wish : )