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Falling Petals

A flower blooms - only for a time - then petal by falling petal, dies. And faster still when winter settles - washing white all color from sight. An heirloom clock wakes sleepy night, a new calendar sits on tidy desk, a still life hanging on shadowed wall - helps to remind of spring's rebirth as days grow ever shorter. Does winter's chill call thoughts of death to those who would rather forget or bury our discontent beneath the snow? In late autumn's weary hours, I tend to the fading flowers and waiting, hold my breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/12/2015 11:02:00 AM
Good free verse, with a little internal rhyming to spice it up, "petal - settles".
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Date: 11/24/2014 6:21:00 PM
wow, the more I see of your poetry recently, the more I realize what a great talent we lost while you were away. this is so beautiful.
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:01:00 PM
Dear Rhonda: Lovely write. Lovely read. Nicely done this meditative poem. Congratulations on this POTD. Leon
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:04:00 PM
rhonda truly very beautifully painted piece congratulations on poem of the day dear friend
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Date: 11/15/2014 5:02:00 PM
perfect, I love this creation, passion from the observer.
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:12:00 PM
Ronda, wonderful write, Congratulations on poem of the day :)eve
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:09:00 PM
Beautiful Rhonda... Congratulations on being featured as poem of the day. Verlena
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:05:00 AM
The sleep of death will wake to the breath of spring. I just covered my garden with a deep blanket of leaf mulch . . . loved the poem.
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Date: 11/15/2014 7:01:00 AM
- A very good work - Congrats with "today's poem" Rhonda ! - Have a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:05:00 PM
Hello Rhonda, A most captivating free verse write here. The imagery is both fabulous and most descriptive. This one's a most solid "7." Enjoyed it very much. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 11/14/2014 12:50:00 PM
Unique imagery, though-packed, wonderful sequences, petals make a cycle of birth-death-rebirth and waiting as catalytic. Grand, perfect 7. adding to my fav...love Rhonda XXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/14/2014 9:40:00 AM
Uniquely creative with such vibrant images. Your line "in autumn's weary hours" calls to mind so many things.
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:07:00 AM
I read a lot more in this poem then meets the eye. It is richly layered with unique imagery. An excellent poem.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:27:00 AM
ohh, you capture the spirit of seasons that finds life a celebration, Rhonda.. well done!.. hugggs
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