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Falling Into The World

The day comes with its invitations, a door that can be unlocked by a thought, a window whose light beckons the soul out of its dark retreat and, along a passageway, the sound of familiar voices. And here you are, cramped for so long in your space that the shape of who you are has become fixed and seized solid in its way. Deep in its contemplative soil it sleeps rootbound in its own pot. If you listen, the world is rousing you as you crawl out of your dream and sit on the side of your life, dangling your feet over the abyss that surrounds you and the shrinking island of yourself. Hear what is being said and let the world welcome you with all of its imperfections, uncertainties and risk. Fall into its arms, recklessly and full of doubt, towards love.

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Date: 12/22/2023 5:21:00 PM
I do like your poetic voice and writing style, Paul. Your words captured my heart and reminded me to 'fall into the world, recklessly, towards love...not only romantic love but love of mankind. Faving this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 12/23/2023 9:16:00 PM
The voice has probably evolved over the years...most of the poems emerge very much under the spell of this rhythm with a few variations. Probably a notch or two above spoken cadence...poetry I think should appeal to the ear. Indeed value your positive words Sara. Blessings for Christmas and the New Year.
Date: 12/22/2023 4:37:00 AM
So evocative Paul and beautiful - I'm trying to take so much more at face value and just be. It's not going all that well but neither was over thinking. So I'm hoping I just need the practice. Certainly the moments are less spoiled at least.
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Paul Willason
Date: 12/23/2023 9:09:00 PM
Letting things be as they are is always a challenge DD. When you have mastered the discipline could you let me in on the secret. Appreciate your kind words...thanks,

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