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Falling Into Her Vision From the Start

Falling Into Her Vision From The Start The sky bent to her loving will losing her brought an epic chill Never ever would I let her go she the angel whiter than snow Music sounds when she walks in she my lover, my eternal friend Days we traveled in love's embrace I deeply lost, in her sweet grace No power could ever stop my ardor every time apart so much harder! My heart she gave again its birth I love her for all I am ever worth Those long nights we burned in bed never did I ever fear to tread Path to her sweet treasure trove I ran, leaped and delightfully dove Each morn her face sang to my soul it was she that again made me whole My All bent to her loving desires she the Sun fueling my sexual fires! Yes, she happily ate my burning heart As I fell into her vision from the start! 09-27-2014

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Date: 9/28/2014 8:37:00 AM
so very beautifully painted robert
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:28:00 AM
So amazingly said Robert. U really hv a romantic heart, ur poem proves it all!
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:12:00 PM
Me too I am like putty The women the girls - the years Is 7 score good for a poem or is 1 the best ?
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:00:00 PM
wonderful romantic write Robert its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 3:50:00 PM
WOW WOW WOW~!! Awesome testament to a committed love. Fantastic, Robert. Enjoyed!!
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